Direi che mi ero sbagliato.
I can tell just from this short-film that this guy knows what he wants to do. Actually great for a 2nd project.
I would reccomend to think more about the story next time, because this felt a bit rushed and stupid sometimes (he litterally killed himself because his friend didn't want to play with him lol).
Btw, are you ok? Why do your characters die in every short of yours? Please ask for help if you need it, alr? (Jk)